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What glues you to a story start to finish?

What hooks do you use to capture your readers?


What glues me to a novel? If I  care about the characters and I want to know what happens to them. What turns me off? Contrived plots, romances where the hero and heroine could solve all their problems if they only spoke to each other. That is the biggest turn off going for me.

I am not a Christian, but one thing I’ve noticed about Christian romances (I’ve reviewed a couple) is that the basic conflict often centers around a crisis of faith on the part of either the hero or heroine. Now that is a plot I can wrap my mind around, and a conflict that will keep me reading.

What do I use to keep my readers reading? Characters I and they care about, and conflicts based on fundamental differences that eventually get resolved.

Want to know what they are? Check out my author page on MuseItUp Publishing

Beverley Bateman
Diane Bator
Ginger Simpson
Skye Taylor
Marci Baun
Margaret Fieland
Helena Fairfax
Anne Stenhouse
Fiona McGier
Connie Vines
Rachael Kosnski
Victoria Chatham
Lynn Crain
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Beverley Bateman
Diane Bator
Ginger Simpson
Skye Taylor
Marci Baun
Margaret Fieland
Helena Fairfax
Anne Stenhouse
Fiona McGier
Connie Vines
Rachael Kosnski
Victoria Chatham
Lynn Crain
Rhobin Courtright

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Researching Science Fiction






What research is involved in writing science fiction? There can be quite a lot, actually. In my first science fiction novel, Relocated,      my main character, Keth, becomes involved in ceramics and glass blowing. I had some knowledge of ceramics left over from a pot-throwing course at summer camp and another summer spent playing with copper enamel, but I knew nothing about blowing glass. So it was off to the internet to check things out and construct — mentally,  anyway — my studio. It turned out to be quite large, with a separate room for storing the finished work, an area for throwing pots, and another with a couple of furnaces for the glass. Because my main character was sweet on the master craftsman’s daughter, I spent a fair amount of time getting the details nailed down to my satisfaction. My character spent quite a  lot of time there, too.

In the next Aleyne novel,  Broken Bonds, I shamelessly picked the brains of my middle son, who was in the army at the time, as my main character was a military officer who was called up on charges. I also researched the International Court, which had an equivalent — the Interstellar Court — in my novel. As well, I checked out procedures for criminal trials. My father was an attorney, my mother served on the Grand Jury, and I have been a juror several times, so I was more comfortable with trials and courtrooms than I was with military procedures. Still, I wanted to get the details right.

I also ended up researching stringed instruments. One of my major characters plays an imaginary stringed instrument, and I wanted to know what it looked and sounded like. I play the flute and the piccolo, but my knowledge of strings is limited, and so it was off to the internet to do some research. In the end, I decided it was made of wood and shaped something like an autoharp, and came in various sizes like violins, violas, cellos and basses do. Did most of this information end up in the text? Um, no, but I needed to know it.

As to badly researched material in books I read, yes, it bugs me. I can still recall a novel by a well-known author where the main character played the flute and composed. I play the flute and the piccolo, and have for many years. Flute players are a dime a dozen, which is one of the many reasons so many of them turn to composing. While the author did a fine job on this aspect, in my opinion she short-changed the flute playing. There were a couple of places in the text where a bit more detail. The character was writing a book on the difficulties of playing the instrument, and there should, I believe, have been more specific detail. It’s been years since I read this novel, and I still find it annoying.

And that is one of the many reasons why I look up glass blowing, the International Court, the military, and stringed instruments. I don’t my readers to have that reaction.

Do check out the posts by my fellow bloggers:
Margaret Fieland
Beverley Bateman
Skye Taylor
Rachael Kosnski
Heidi M. Thomas
Marci Baun
Anne Stenhouse
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Fiona McGier
A.J. Maguire
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Lynn Crain
Rhobin Courtright

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Meet Janet Brown

Meet author Janet K. Brown, author of Worth her Weight

Janet K. Brown lives in Wichita Falls, Texas with her husband, Charles. Writing became her second career after  retirement from medical coding.  Worth Her Weight will be the author’s debut inspirational women’s fiction, but it makes a perfect companion to her recently released, Divine Dining: 365 Devotions to Guide You to Healthier Weight and Abundant Wellness. Both books encompass her passion for diet, fitness, and God’s Word. janet (3)

Worth Her Weight marks Brown’s third book. Who knew she had a penchant for teens and ghosts? She released her debut novel, an inspirational young adult, Victoria and the Ghost, in July,  2012.

Janet and her husband love to travel with their RV, visit their three daughters, two sons-in-law and three perfect grandchildren, and work in their church. Find her at

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Can you tell us a bit about your book?

Worth Her Weight is an inspirational women’s fiction. Here is what you’ll see on the back cover.WHW_cover_11-26-14 (1)

How can a woman who gives to everyone but herself accept God’s love and healing when she believes she’s fat, unworthy, and unfixable? Can she be Worth Her Weight?

LACEY CHANDLER helps her mother, her sister, her friend, and then she binges on food and wonders is there really a God?

BETTY CHANDLER hates being handicapped and useless, so she lashes out at the daughter that helps, and the God who doesn’t seem to care.

TOBY WHEELER loves being police chief in Wharton Rock, but when the devil invades the small town, he can’t release control.

Here’s the trailer for the book:


Did you always want to be a writer?

I had a junior high teacher that inspired me to write. I think I’ve been writing something ever since. When my children were small, I published a few short stories. I submitted one novel, it was rejected, and I quit that until years later.


When did you start writing seriously, and what do you think was the trigger?

My demanding job as a medical coder/bookkeeper in a doctor’s office pushed out writing except for daily journals until I retired eight years ago. After that, I delved into writing as a second career, joining writing groups, attending conferences and workshops, and submitting often. It’s been quite a ride. I got enough rejections to paper my wall before I got the first contract.


I notice you live in Texas. How do you believe the state has shaped what you write?

They say write what you know, so I do.

My YA ghost series takes place in Texas. The first one, Victoria and the Ghost, already published happens at a registered Texas ghost town, Clara. The second one, contracted but not published yet, happens in McKinney, TX, near Dallas.

The new women’s fiction, Worth Her Weight, takes place in a fictional North Texas town.


How do you find your personal beliefs have shaped your writing?

I write from a Christian worldview. Though not preachy, my characters either look at things from that perspective or come to view things that way. My tagline is Writing God’s Message of Hope. My desire is to offer hope to those suffering from addictions, compulsions, or any insurmountable problem at the same time I entertain them with a good story.

If you could meet any writer, living or dead, who would it be and why?

I read a lot of Fern Michaels. Her stories grip your emotions and don’t let go. I just know she would have some good advice on how to do that. I would like to ask her why she quit writing.

Of ones I have met, Margaret Daley, tops my list. She introduced me to Christian fiction and has been a mentor every since.


If you could take only one book with you to a desert island, what would it be and why?

Wow, you sure ask difficult questions. If only one book, it would have to be the Bible.

I would prefer a stack of books because I like to change from one genre to the next. I generally keep a fiction and non-fiction going all the time.

If I did narrow that down to two, I’d say non-fiction would be Courage to Change by Bill Pittman and Dick B. Fiction would be The Debt by Angela Hunt.


Who is your favorite writer in your genre?

I have 3 different genres published.

I’ve already given my favorite for women’s fiction – Angela Hunt.

For YA, my favorite would be Beverly Stowe McClure.

For devotion books, I would say Mrs. Charles E. Cowman.

Did you have a favorite book growing up, and what was it?

To be honest, I don’t remember reading much as a child.


What is your favorite piece of writing advice?

2 things

Write something every day.

And Read something every day.


Can you tell us a bit about your writing process?

After I get an idea, I write 2-3 chapters just letting the creative process take over without any editing.

Then, I stop and interview my characters. I draw what I call an amoeba with four points determining plot points and black moment. Sometimes, if know at this point, I might make a chapter by chapter outline, but not always.

Then, I begin to write as before, not stopping to edit until the full first draft is finished. Then, I make up a storyboard adding colored post-it notes for each main thread and see where there’s work to be done. I read and edit the entire manuscript six to eight times before I call it done.

What are you working on now?

I’m writing a sequel to Worth Her Weight. It will involve pornography as the addiction in the same small town.

At the same time, I’m working with my editor Renee La Viness from 4RV Publishing to improve my YA A Ghost for Shelley due out later in 2015.


What do you want readers to take away from your book?

Many good people become caregivers and volunteers but don’t take care of themselves. I want them to understand, though they may become addicted to food and feel fat and worthless, there can be hope and lasting joy despite what life throws their way.

Any last words?

Just that I wish to thank you, Margaret, for hosting me as your guest and allowing me to tell about my new book. I’m greatly honored.

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Reading and Writing

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What is your favorite time and place to read? How about writing time? Do you have to make time?

Do you have a ritual or is your plan helter-skelter? I had a quilting teacher who followed the swiss cheese method to completing tasks: Make a hole here, and sometime later a hole there; keep repeating this until the whole thing is complete. What’s your method?

I am tempted to read anytime and anyplace, but my favorite time to read is in bed before I turn out the light and go to sleep.  I am an avid reader, and reading before bed relaxes me and helps me let go of my problems and anxieties. I enjoy reading all kinds of books, especially science fiction, fantasy, and romance {blush} as well as popular novels. I don’t enjoy reading horror but do like reading the occasional mystery. I have read all of Sherlock Holmes, many more than once. I love Alice in Wonderland, and used to reread it every exam time when I was in college. I had a copy of  The Annotated Alice, and this was the one I read and reread. In the commentary, it had a copy of Jabberwocky in French. What a trip that was.

I studied French in both high school and college, and I was (and am) fairly fluent, but, let me tell you, reading made-up words in a foreign language is tough. One summer I spent in the Netherlands doing work-study — I was assistant to a professor at one of the universities. I signed up at the local library. This was one of the first things I did — I needed to have access to a decent supply of books. They had one shelf of books in English, but fortunately a whole bookcase of volumes in French.

I read Fahrenheit 451 in French (fortunately, I’d already read it in English), as well as several other sci fi novels. I read some non-fiction, including one by a cancer surgeon that haunts me to this day. I also discovered George Simenon,and read every copy they had of the Inspecteur Maigret novels. My father was an attorney, so I was familiar with the difference between the French and English/American legal systems.

In case you’re not, it’s like this: In English and American legal systems, you’re innocent until proven guilty. In the French system, you’re guilty until proven innocent. This makes the stakes for Maigret, charged with investigating a crime and discovering the guilty party, that much higher. If he gets it wrong, an innocent person might suffer.

After I finished the Maigret novels, I started on the rest of their Simenon collection.

I haunt my local library. I begin to suffer from anxiety if I don’t have a stack of books to read. I prefer paper to ebooks, but I do read ebooks sometimes. Having access to them eases my book anxiety — I can pretty much always go online and find something else to read.

Check out what my fellow bloggers have to say:
A.J. Maguire
Geeta Kakade
Skye Taylor
Marci Baun
Fiona McGier
Connie Vines
Beverley Bateman
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Rachael Kosnski
Helena Fairfax
Heidi M. Thomas
Ginger Simpson
Rhobin Courtright

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A Gift for Readers: A Case of the Flue

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In honor of Christmas, I’m sharing the following flash fiction piece with y’all.




A Case of the Flue


“Santa has a fever. Mrs. Claus put him to bed.”  Rudolph pawed the snowy ground. “Who will drive the sleigh?”

“No one,” Blixen said. “We’ll send everything by Federal Express.”

“Belief in Santa is at an all-time low. If we send everything by mail, no one will believe.” Rudolph tossed his antlers, almost skewering Blixen.

“And Santa will feel useless and become depressed.” Blixen led the way into the barn.

LineDrawTrees2“Ready to get hitched?” one of the elves asked. Without waiting for an answer, he began harnessing the reindeer.

Blixen  said, “Rudolph is in the lead. He could grab the gifts by the ribbons and drop them down the chimneys.”

“But what if the children spot the Santa-less sleigh? Then no one will ever believe again.”

“We should go. It’s our best chance to save Christmas.” Blixen stamped his hoof and turned to the elf. “Freddie, go tell Mrs. Claus to tell Santa not to worry, we’re on top of the delivery crisis.”

“Better hope everyone’s cleaned their chimney,” Blixen muttered as they rose into the air.

The rest of the reindeer snickered.


And so, boys and girls, don’t feel too bad if you got a lump or two of coal this year.


Have a very merry holiday, and be sure to check out the posts of my fellow bloggers


Ginger Simpson
Beverley Bateman
Fiona McGier
Diane Bator
Rachael Kosnski
Margaret Fieland
Helena Fairfax
Anne Stenhouse
Marci Baun
A.J. Maguire
Victoria Chatham
Kay Sisk
Rhobin Courtright

Skye Taylor

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Dec 8th John roseman guest post

johnrosenman-sm[2]Do You Still Believe in Heroes?

John B. Rosenman

In the last few years, we’ve seen heroes we admired fall from grace as a result of disgusting or disappointing revelations about their behavior and character. After a while, we are likely to become cynical and ask ourselves if any of the larger-than-life celebrities or public figures we often idolize is genuine or worthy of our adulation. Perhaps they are all contemptible hypocrites, frauds hiding behind smiling, photogenic images whose hair is always in place and whose hollow words only sound noble.

In my fiction I often portray heroes. None of them is perfect because each one is only human. Most of my novels are science fiction and speculative fiction, and they feature heroes like Stella McMasters of Beyond Those Distant Stars who saves humanity from invading aliens (Mundania Press); Dax Rigby of Dax Rigby, War Correspondent, a news reporter with godlike healing powers who travels 90,000 light-years to a savage planet (MuseItUp Publishing); and Kan in Dark Wizard, a man suffering from amnesia here on Earth in San Luis Obispo, California who brings a dead girl back to life (also MuseItUp Publishing). All three heroes have flaws but wish to help others.

Turtan, an Inspector [elite agent] of the Cross, is the incomparable protagonist of my Inspector of the Cross series. The first two novels are Inspector of the Cross and Kingdom of the Jax. Book 3, Defender of the Flame, will appear in January. In a nutshell, the Cen, cruel and heartless alien invaders, have crushed humanity for five thousand years, and only Turtan’s brilliance has kept the Cross empire from annihilation. Let me tell you a few things about my hero.

1. Turtan is 3,997 years old. What’s his secret? He travels in freeze ships in suspended animation from planet to planet to investigate reports of devices or weapons that might turn the tide against our seemingly invincible enemy. In the process he has found several mechanisms that have made a difference and prolonged the war though defeat still seems inevitable.

2. Though he is chronologically in his forties, suspended animation means he has outlived many generations and has loved and left many women and children he has fathered. On one occasion he met his great grandson as an old, old man. Living outside the natural flow of time has had a terrible emotional effect on Turtan, and he has paid a terrible price. Though he is the greatest Inspector of all and has survived in his profession far longer than any other Inspector, he has suffered mental torment and deterioration, for no human is designed to live under such intolerable conditions. Only his innate strength and dedication to our cause have saved him.

3. He wants to serve and save humanity and will do anything to defeat the Cen, whom he hates for their heartless, calculating savagery toward a Tannis child when he was a young Inspector, and their arrogant cruelty and coldness ever since. Yet he is flexible and open-minded enough to have married Yaneta, a beautiful Cen female who has become his ally. Turtan is the complete hero, pure and adaptable in every respect. In some ways he is Christ-like, for he bears the sins and sufferings of many like a cross on his back and is betrayed by his own leaders.

4. He is unique and complete. In Turtan all the necessary analytical, intellectual, physical, and personal skills and attributes have coalesced to create a one in a trillion hero, a perfect composite. Perhaps such a confluence of abilities could never occur again. When he was ten, Cross specialists gave him a test that identified his potential and hinted at his immense and peerless gift.

5. Part of his greatness is that it is felt by others and influences them to follow him. Turtan possesses off-the-chart charisma. Women find him irresistible. Even the enemy Emperor says he is “the greatest of all knights” and there is “a force in this man, something even beyond his ability that is felt by others.” Kit, in Defender of the Flame, gives up her desire to explore the stars because she feels “there are galaxies inside your brain” it would take me “a dozen lifetimes” to explore, and even then I would “never get to know” you completely.

6. Yet Turtan is not impressed by himself. He feels he is a “simple man, a star-hopping nincompoop.” Yes, he knows he has skills, but his focus is on what he does, not on pride or self-promotion.

7. In fact, he hates attention. He despises speeches in his honor or statues in his likeness. In Kingdom of the Jax, the second of the series, he has to wear a stuffy suit and attend a State banquet in his honor with the Emperor present. For him it’s torture, and he has to endure speech after bloated speech extolling his virtues. Call it extreme humility. Deep down praise embarrasses and angers him.

8. Turtan has an immense capacity for love. Over the centuries, over the millennia, he has loved many women and children he has fathered, and he has been forced to leave them all because of duty and his endless missions. He wishes he could settle down like ordinary men and raise a family, have at least one child he can love and see grow for more than a few months. Turtan loves his long-dead mother deeply but with a guilty conscience he can never salve for he went into space against her wishes to serve the Cross. He loves as well the people and the Emperor he serves and wants above all that future children will one day grow up without fear in a world of peace and freedom.

9. He desires to explore the universe and its infinite secrets, to see new wonders as when he plunged down a black hole in Inspector of the Cross. To quote from the end of Defender of the Flame, “It was a vast universe, and he had only just begun to explore it.”

10. Last, he has a devastating wit and sense of humor and sometimes uses obscene and insulting language. When he meets the glacial Captain Isinger in Defender of the Flame, he thinks, “Captain Isinger or Icicle gives me a smile that would neuter a man wearing a heavy duty radiation suit.” Captured by the enemy in Inspector of the Cross, he says, “Tell your emperor for me his mother is one of the best whores.” Complex and multifaceted, Turtan is no angel.

These are major traits of my greatest hero, and I think some of them should characterize real life heroes as well. If only our leaders and role models wished to serve others rather than themselves and weren’t so selfish and egotistic. If only they realized that a flashy image for public consumption is a cheap lie, and it is what lies beneath that matters. Perhaps only a few of us can approach the ideal, but fortunately in fiction, we writers can try.


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(In a dream, Turtan remembers his fateful decision and the first woman he left.)

Her eyes were dark with despair, though he barely noticed. Beyond her, he could see the gleaming sprawl of the spaceport, the ship pointing up at the Texas sun like a giant finger.

“Don’t leave, Tan. Don’t do this to us!”

He pulled his gaze away. “Stella, we’ve been all over this a hundred times. I have to go.”

“I’ll be an old woman by the time you get back. Where you’re going is thirty-two years away. It’s sixty-four years there and back! God, I’ll be eighty-six when you return. And with suspension, you’ll still be only…”

“Take it easy.”

“Only twenty-eight damn years old. Tan, I’ll be old enough to be your grandmother! You won’t want to hold me anymore, let alone…”

He watched tears spill down her beautiful face and stepped back.

“I’m sorry. I have to go.”


“Because they need me. Because they poured forty million credits of training and trust into me, and I can’t let them down. I made a commitment.”

“Break it. It’s a stupid, senseless war. Let the Cenknife have everything, eat every damned world in the galaxy till they choke.”

“You don’t mean it, not after they killed your brother and destroyed his ship. We have a duty…”

She shook her head. “The trouble with you is you believe their patriotic bull of country and empire. Tan, they’re only two power-hungry conglomerates. They don’t care who they kill as long—”

“No. I don’t believe it. I’m fighting for our freedom, for our children’s future.”

“If so, stay here. With me!”

“I can’t.”

Members of a flight crew passed him, their suits shiny and new. He closed his eyes. The crew smelled glazed with stardust, anointed by infinity. And she wanted to hold him back with guilt and tears! He opened his eyes and stepped forward, burying his fingers in her hair as his lips bruised her mouth. For a long moment, he held her, knowing this was all he’d ever have, and it would have to make up for everything. With a sob, he tore himself away, feeling her nails rake his back as he raced toward the ship, not looking back. The airlock doors clanged, and he floated up a gleaming corridor, feeling the engine’s immense hum. In the freezing room, falsely hearty, Cross techs slipped needles into his veins and sucked out his blood, filling him with preservatives. He lay back, consciousness fading, the sole passenger aboard a fifty meter rocket aimed at his first investigation among the stars. Space waited above him, and unlike others, he could explore it forever, his life suspended in a transparent crypt.

“I love you, Tan.”

He struggled to open his eyes, uncertainty for the first time crossing his mind. What if she were right, and he was wrong, and he was sacrificing their love on a false altar? What did wars, including intergalactic ones, ever prove? A thousand battlefields, a million cemeteries. All the propaganda in the world wouldn’t bring the dead back. It wouldn’t erase the countless names on soldiers’ tombstones, or dry up any loved ones’ tears. “Holy Wars Open Empty Doors,” his brain babbled, freezing into a marble vault inside his skull. Wars only fill industrialists’ pockets and grow widows’ weeds.

No, No.

I love you, Tan.”

Desperate, sane too late, he struggled up. Stella was right. Love and a family were worth any noble cause. He must escape, tell them he’d changed his mind, go to her. He felt consciousness return. Yes, he was going to make it, make it even though his veins were ammonia ice, and the woman he loved was three thousand, five hundred years dead. He opened his eyes.

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dec 3 suzanne de montigny interview

SONY DSCMargaret Fieland Interviews Suzanne de Montigny

Tell us something about yourself?

Well, there’s nothing much to say about me except I’m so busy between my boys, my husband, Buddy the dog, and my books. (What a great life I lead!)

Tell us something about your latest book?

Well, I’m most pleased to announce that my first novel, The Shadow of the Unicorn: The Legacy, was recently released as a print book. (Bells and whistles and vuvuzelas!) Here’s the blurb.

A loud, hissing sound filled the air. The unicorns looked up, their eyes filled with horror.theshadowoftheunicorn200x300 (2)new

Azaria, a unicorn colt, is intrigued when the young, clairvoyant dinosaur, Darius, foresees a terrifying change to their world. When a giant fireball smashes into the earth, the unicorns struggle to survive the hurricanes and starvation that follow. But nothing compares to the danger when the creatures-that-walk-on-two-legs settle in the valley, and their leader discovers the healing power in the unicorns’ horns. Greedy and ruthless, Ishmael will stop at nothing in his pursuit of wealth – even the complete extinction of the herd. Azaria must find a way to outsmart Ishmael before it’s too late.

And this winter, the second of the series, The Shadow of the Unicorn: The Deception, will also be released. Here’s a sneak preview.

How did the Legacy of Azaria transform to a world of fear it has with the unicorns barely existing hidden in the depths of the forest? Why is Icharus, the Great Stallion, so cruel and ruthless? And who is Jaresh, the powerful being no one’s ever seen who takes away their powers? Angry, the young colt, Ulysees and his friend Téo rebel, following an abandoned trail where they’re discovered by humans. Now the entire herd must make an exodus. But Ulysees discovers there’s more danger then just humans when he meets a giant creature who warns them of impending doom…

Did you have a series in mind when you wrote the first Unicorn book?

Not really. The unicorns decided that all on their own. They wanted to keep on living.

Do you plan any more books in the series?

Oh, yes! There’s one more after this one. And it happens way in the future during the Medieval times. And in there’s one, there’s something really wrong with the protagonist.

What would you like readers to take away from your books?

A very important lesson about endangered species and how easy it is to drive them to extinction through our own greed.

Why did you start writing for children?

It was only natural since I taught elementary school and spent a lot of time telling kids stories at the end of class.

Can you tell us something about your writing process?

I just sit down and let the characters take over.

What’s your favorite book in your genre?

Well…it’s one of my unpublished manuscripts. It’s called A Town Bewitched. Here’s the blurb for that one:

It’s tough for Kira, growing up in the small town of Hope as a child prodigy in classical violin, and especially when her dad just died. But when Kate McDonough, the red-haired fiddler, appears out of nowhere and bewitches the town with her mysterious Celtic music, only Kira seems to know who’s been vandalizing the town, leaving dead and gutted birds as a calling card.


Where can readers find you on the web?


Where can readers buy your books?



Barnes and Noble:




Muse It Up Publishing:


Any last words?

Yes. I’d be happy to give away an ebook copy of The Shadow of the Unicorn: The Legacy to a reader who leaves a comment.


Check out Suzanne’s trailer:

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Nov 25 Meet Penny Estelle and her characters, Elizabeth McMurphy and Steve York

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Good morning, Margaret. Thanks so much for having me on your blog today. I’m visiting Colorado for the holidays and I would like to introduce two guests I have brought along with me.

This is Elizabeth McMurphy and Steve York.

So Elizabeth, let me start with you. Tell us all a bit about yourself and what you do and what your holiday plans are.

Elizabeth I am an attorney with D.D & D. I am rounding up a high profile case right now. When that is done I am heading out of town.

Can you share with us what the case is about?

Steve I can tell you about it. This snow queen is trying to bring one of the most respected men in Denver to his knees on some trumped up charges.

Folks, this is Steve York and he works for the Denver Gazette.

Elizabeth What Mr. York needs to do is stick to reporting the weather because he has no idea what this case is all about and weather is something his small brain can wrap around.

Now you two, let’s all take a breath and calm down and talk about our Christmas plans.

Elizabeth My plans are to head to the mountains. I have a cabin up there and I can get away from obnoxious, know-it-all reporters who don’t have a clue.

Steve As it turns out, after I get this last story out about certain injustices, I am also headed out of town to spend time with family. I have had my fill of overblown spoiled bitches.

Okay, okay. Let me thank you both for coming in to chat with me and all these fine people and I think we’ve heard enough for now. I hope your holidays are restful and you each get the happiness you are looking for.

The Unwanted Christmas Guest

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Elizabeth McMurphy is an up and coming high powered attorney and is after vengeance, involving one of the richest and most powerful families in Colorado. Steve York is an obnoxious reporter that thinks the ice queen has gone too far and does all he can to get under her skin.

When one of the worst blizzards in history, hits CO and leaves a hurt Steve York, stranded with Elizabeth in a mountain cabin. Things start to heat up between the two, thawing their icy relationship. But – Elizabeth guards a secret that must be kept at all costs, even to the point of risking love and her own happiness.


“What’s going on here? Where the hell are my pants?”

Elizabeth practically jumped out of her skin. Steve stood in the bedroom doorway, wearing only some tight fitting pink sweats.

“I found you after your car went nose to nose with a tree.” She crossed her arms. “The question is, what were you doing up here in a snowstorm? Were you coming up here to spy on me?”

“Jesus, my head hurts.” Steve groaned and sat at the kitchen table. “And don’t flatter yourself.” He brought up his hands to rub his eyes and push on his temples. He started to say something when a giggle and a round of undistinguishable sounds caught his attention. Steve stared at the little girl, a whisper of a smile on his pale face. “You have a daughter?”

She chose to ignore the question. “Again, Mr. York, you were headed…where?”

“I was going to see some friends in Granby, then on to Steamboat to spend the holidays with my family.”

“You figured on taking a short cut on Badger Springs Road?”

“Basically,” he muttered. “I had a phone in my pants pocket…” Steve looked down at the pink sweats. “Yours, I presume?” At her nod, he asked with a smirk, “And you’re the one that took my clothes off?”

“Junior, my neighbor.”

“If you’ll allow me to use your phone, I’ll call Triple A and get myself and my car out of your life.” He reached over to Katy and she latched onto his finger, the brightest smile ever illuminating her sweet face.

Elizabeth quickly picked her up, as if he would contaminate her by his touch. “Phones are out.”



“How the hell do you live here?” he asked irritably.

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Nov 22: what’s your favorite food or meal?

Fish, glorious Fish!

I might not have picked fish if I were able to eat it at home, but I’m not. My spouse is deathly allergic to anything that swims in water, so the only time I get to eat it is when I g o out for a meal. Tuna sandwiches at lunch counters, shrimp scampi in fine restaurants, baked stuffed cod or boiled lobster, I dream of you all.

Of course, there are lots of other foods I love, including cheese of all kinds. Not that I should be eating cheese, mind you, but it really is another favorite.

Hmm — now, fish with cheese. There’s a thought.
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Nov 19 Janie Franz interview

Tell us something about yourself?

I come from a long line of liars and storytellers. I enjoy enjoy traveling and good conversation. I find people fascinating everywhere I go.

How did you start writing fantasy novels? thebowdancersagabundle

My fantasy writing is grounded in my Bowdancer Saga that began many years ago. The first scene of the first book, The Bowdancer, a novelette, came from a meditation I had. I continued that story through The Wayfarer’s Road and The Warrior Women. Those three books became the Bowdancer Saga. Three more books followed, The Lost Song Trilogy: Verses, Refrain, and Coda.

I have always been fascinated by cultures and that was why I returned to college as a much older than average student to earn a degree in anthropology. Though I’ve read a lot of fantasy and science fiction, it was always those about another culture that interested me the most—not hard science and not dwarves and elves.

From that first meditation, I saw the bowdancer atop a hill shooting out that first flaming arrow to gather her people into a villager to a wedding. I knew her and what she faced immediately. The details of her culture are revealed through the whole series.

I created a world based on a reverence for the earth and work. The books are filled with herb lore (medicinal and culinary), chants and songs, dance, music (though you cannot hear it), spiritual beliefs, and different lifeways of the people the bowdancer meets in her life.

What is your favorite among your own books?

I am quite fond of all six of the Bowdancer books. I think of them, Warrior Women and Verses of the Lost Song Trilogy are probably my favorites.

Of my other books, Sugar Magnolia, a book about the music industry is a favorite.

What is your favorite fantasy novel?

Hmmm. That’s hard to decide. I’ve read a lot of Marian Zimmer Bradley, Ann McCaffrey (Dragonriders of Pern series), Mercedes Lakey, Ursual Le Guin, and Tolkien, of course, as well as a lot of new writers like Robert Liparulo, Tamora Pierce, and, J. K. Rowlings. It’s really hard to pick just one. I think my whole writing life has been shaped by those authors and others, including some really great mysteries and thriller writers, including Gregg Hurwitz and his page turners.

Can you tell us something about your writing process?

I’m a pantser. I start with an idea and then plunge myself into the story, letting my characters frame the plot. Usually, they don’t lead me wrong. I will do research either before I start a book or during the writing process.

What do you want readers to take away from your books?

I think all of my books deal with empowered women characters, especially those in the Bowdancer books. I deal with themes of isolation, difference, bigotry, independence, and a search for meaning and belonging. Because these themes are worked out in a culture in a created world, it is my hope that readers can look at the characters and what happens to them, especially in their relationships, and see parallels in their own lives and in society today.

What are your strengths as a writer? What do you struggle with?

I think my strengths lie in my ability to create realistic characters even though a lot of them are in created worlds. I think every writer faces the challenge of drawing characters that live and breathe on the page. And it is my hope that writers become emotionally involved with mine.

As a writer, I struggle with life intervening into my writing process. I think that has been why writing my next book has been difficult.

What are you working on now?

My current work in progress is Legacy, the third book of the Ruins trilogy, my archaeology romance thriller series. It’s taken a long time to write this one.

What do you do when you’re not writing?

I live in Santa Fe, NM. I love the landscape here. I’ve been struggling with trying to create a garden here. It’s been one of the hardest things I’ve ever tried to do. It’s not the soil, the limited water, or the plant varieties. It’s the intense sun at 7200 feet. My choice is either to force my will on the land or let it influence me. Perhaps I need to take a lesson from my own writing process and that is to let the land tell me what to do.

Besides working in my garden, I love to dance and go to archaeology sites—and there are many of them here.

Where can readers find you on the web?

Here is my author’s page at MuseItUp Publishing where you can read excerpts from all my books:

My author website is here:

Where can readers find your books?

My books can be found at Amazon, Barnes & Noble, Kobo, and other ebooksellers, as well as my publisher’s website.

The Bowdancer Saga is being offered as a bundle in a special for two weeks, starting Nov 28. The first three books of the Bowdancer Saga (The Bowdancer Saga, The Wayfarer’s Road, and Warrior Women) will be available for sale as a bundle for a special price of $2.99 for two weeks only. Those books, if sold separately, would cost $12.50

The bundle is available for presale here:

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